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Quite frankly, I can't think of any ways to improve on this.

Great flash! I can't wait for more!

It looks like a really promising series! Even the animation was great for the most part! A bit higher FPS would be good though I think to make the animation more smooth. Another thing that could help out would be getting a couple other voice actors to help you out.

Overall, it's great! With some fine-tuning I think it could become a cult-classic among flash (if it isn't already on the way to that) or even a fully recognized icon for NG or whatever other site you post it on (Similar to Alien Hominid, Madness, or Xombie)

Aces and stars!

I love it in just about every possible way, great choice in music and there was a lot of synergy it had with the actual animation, and the message behind it (which if you read the author description is more than just fighting stick dudes) Is something I really can get behind and haven't heard before, yet rings true. I also suffer from inactivity and laziness and I don't really think it's so much that I feel like I couldn't even do great things if I tried, but more that I could never "really" reach my true potential, and that even if I did it would only cause problems and complications. So generally I just don't work to pursue the greatness hidden inside of me. And so my skills and spirit get rusty and weak, and the longer I decline or stay stagnant instead of growing as a person, the harder it is to achieve the next great thing. This might have actually made a big change in my lifestyle, we'll see in the future. But even if it didn't, thanks for making this amazing animation with it's incredible message =)

As for the animation itself, it was smooth, sleek, and had great effects. At brief fractions of a second, it seemed like attacks and the opponents reaction didn't seem to quite line up completely. (too low of reaction or too powerful of one) And there was a couple brief moments where another frame added may have improved the movement and made it seem more fluid and easy to follow. Otherwise, I love it to death! 10/10! Good show hun! ^_^

Keep up the good work, and don't let that rust take hold again!

I love it!

It had a few things (very few things) which seemed to be missing, but otherwise it was just great! I definitely hope to see a sequel, hopefully that's longer than this one. One of the main things I found wrong with this one was that it wasn't long enough, which is actually a really good thing for you, since that means the game was good enough that I wanted to play it longer XD Most games I play don't wind up with that kind of response from me.

Just a few changes I might recomend:

Being able to stack gear similarly to the materials
More powerful enemies with greater rewards
A larger max stack size for materials
"Unknown" recipes, or ones to discover out in the world.
Creatures with more hostile tendencies
A map
Teleporters for back to the ship or home base or whatever

Of course, those are all only suggestions. I'm not a game designer, so maybe I'm being retarded for asking for those things =P Good luck in the future, hoping for a sequel to this great game! *crosses my fingers*

*sobs*

WHYYY!? It's such a good game but WHYYY! For the love of god these levels are driving me insane! Once I literally got so frustrated and hopeless that I "literally" had tears forming in the corner of my eye. I understand you were trying to make the game challenging but jesus christ, this is just ridiculous o_O. It needs "massive" balancing, or redesigned levels, or smaller hitboxes on the spikes (or character), or a new ability to make it not so brutally, keyboard smashing, mind-rapingly hard! Even the "easy" evil karma path started to get hard because no matter where I looked I just couldn't find the red portal.

I like the gameplay for the most part, but the difficulty was just too much for me to finish. Frankly I find it shocking when I find games with such insane difficulty like this, cause I figure the author would have played through their complete game at least one or two times and seen any major flaws like that. I'm sorry but next time, if you're testing a game you've finished for the most part, don't just say to yourself "Well, I probably just suck at the game, others will probably do a lot better" Cause that's very unlikely to be the case. Or if you don't think most people will be capable of finishing it, it'd be nice to have a disclaimer saying something like "This game gets really fucking hard, do not expect to get to the end unless you're extremely skilled"

Aside from that, it's great. I love how you choose the different abilities for each level, from basic things like walking left or right, to warping around, levitating, and shooting bullets. (although for anything but switches, the bullets were rather useless) With the game-breaking difficulty though, I have to subtract 2 whole points from the score I'd give this game otherwise. Bringing it from 9, down to 7. Sorry hun.

Great game but...

I've been checking in on the game regularly for quite a while hoping for more updates like the addition of Fancy Pants and Hank, but unfortunately that doesn't seem to be happening :( I guess I shouldn't review a game based on what I was hoping for or the potential of the game, but I really can't help it after you teased us with those new characters and updates, only to suddenly stop. I would love to see one of the Castle Crashers, or Dad, or Bitey in this game, all of them would probably be pretty kick ass additions. Maybe an online multiplayer function would be nice too. Maybe I'm out of the loop and you're working on a full sequel, but if you are I would love for you to put it up in "this" games description.

As for the game itself, I love it! ^_^ A couple of the challenge levels are a little hard but that's totally okay, 100% completion should be an award for the best players anyways. Needless to say there are a lot of places where it can improve, but the same with all games. Among free flash games, this one is definately top tier. Keep up the good work, and if possible, please add more updates to this or work on a sequel, I'm sure it would turn out amazing with the advancement in flash technology lately :)

Role reversal!

It seems like your BF or whatever seems a little embarrassed about the dress XD Anyways, it's good for the most part, but I'd highly advice working on the hands. I understand those are the hardest things to draw for most artists, but it's also a very important thing to learn if you're going to draw full characters instead of just faces and such. I actually rather like the simplistic, cartoony style, and quite frankly for most character art, highly prefer that sort of art style to the anime type that's seen so commonly.

Basically, you're doing great, especially for your age, and there's nowhere you can go but up, but you do still have quite a ways to go. Keep up the good work, I'm sure your future stuff will be fully worth a 10/10 ^_^